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Posted on 07-14-08 5:13
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So its Monday and am getting Monday blues; lets say pretty much bored at office. So here is deal:
I start the story with three words. Then you add on three words to the story. Only three words that is. And if you want to put end to sentence put full stop.
Then after this post reaches 600 posts, that's 1800 words, We ll
compose the whole thing and make story out of it. So here it goes.
It was mundane
Update: As per request by Aviator and seeing the relevance, each poster can add a sentence.So Lets build a story now! =)
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It
was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are
legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in
tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She
started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in
transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for
something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately.
But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two
sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world.
Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She
was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in
love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had
always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she
was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and
finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he
goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he
musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen
carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It was two years ago, on this very day, and i was
driving home from work when it all happened." It was raining hard
outside and terrible storm was rattling over the tin roof above him.
"Old lady called me again!!" He muttered catching his breath. "Beware,
young man", she had warned him with that ominous voice,"A day will come
when all your mortal desires shall cause you much great harm, and you
shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from
the eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could
reply back he had heard the click from the other end. His
final decision as to whether or not to believe the ominous call would
have to be his own, he thought, while there was gentle knock on his
door. He was afraid to answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away.
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Posted on 07-16-08 7:49
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It was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately. But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world. Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!" He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own, he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear.
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Posted on 07-16-08 9:09
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It was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately. But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world. Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!" He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own, he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear. Well not really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so distracted these days!
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Posted on 07-16-08 9:29
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It was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately. But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world. Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!" He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own, he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear. Well not really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so distracted these days! He takes a peek
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Posted on 07-16-08 12:23
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It was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately. But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world. Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!" He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own, he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear. Well not really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so distracted these days! He takes a peek. "What the ... "
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It was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately. But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world. Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!" He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own, he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear. Well not really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so distracted these days! He takes a peek. “What the….†The hallway is dark, too dark. It seems like someone has taken out all the light bulbs. “Damn Mexicans!!!â€, he mutters under his breath.
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Posted on 07-16-08 1:04
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It was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately. But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world. Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!" He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own, he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear. Well not really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so distracted these days! He takes a peek. “What the….†The hallway is dark, too dark. It seems like someone has taken out all the light bulbs. “Damn Mexicans!!!â€, he mutters under his breath. "Trying to sell taco at this hour of night!"
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It
was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are
legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in
tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She
started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in
transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for
something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately.
But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two
sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world.
Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She
was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in
love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had
always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she
was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and
finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he
goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he
musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen
carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It
was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work
when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm
was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!"
He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned
him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal
desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the
eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply
back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as
to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own,
he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to
answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half
sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear.
Well not really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so
distracted these days! He takes a peek. “What
the….†The hallway is dark, too dark. It seems like someone has taken
out all the light bulbs. “Damn Mexicans!!!â€, he mutters under his
breath. "Trying to sell taco at this hour of night!"
Crippled from last week's accident, he languishingly limps through the dark corridor, holding tightly onto a 0.357 Magnum only to find a shadow lurking at the other end of the wall.
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Posted on 07-16-08 5:48
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was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are
legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in
tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She
started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in
transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for
something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately.
But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two
sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world.
Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She
was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in
love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had
always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she
was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and
finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he
goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he
musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen
carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It
was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work
when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm
was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!"
He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned
him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal
desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the
eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply
back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as
to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own,
he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to
answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half
sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear.
Well not really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so
distracted these days! He takes a peek. “What
the….†The hallway is dark, too dark. It seems like someone has taken
out all the light bulbs. “Damn Mexicans!!!â€, he mutters under his
breath. "Trying to sell taco at this hour of night!" Crippled from last week's accident, he languishingly limps through the dark corridor, holding tightly onto a 0.357 Magnum only to find a shadow lurking at the other end of the wall. "Show yourself...or I'll shoot" , he yells at the general direction of the shadow while moving slowly towards it.
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It was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately. But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world. Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!" He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own, he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear. Well not really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so distracted these days! He takes a peek. “What the….†The hallway is dark, too dark. It seems like someone has taken out all the light bulbs. “Damn Mexicans!!!â€, he mutters under his breath. "Trying to sell taco at this hour of night!"
Crippled from last week's accident, he languishingly limps through the dark corridor, holding tightly onto a 0.357 Magnum only to find a shadow lurking at the other end of the wall. "Show yourself...or I'll shoot" , he yells at the general direction of the shadow while moving slowly towards it.
He utters silently "head I kill you, tail you die".
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It
was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are
legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in
tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She
started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in
transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for
something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately.
But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two
sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world.
Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She
was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in
love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had
always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she
was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and
finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he
goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he
musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen
carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It
was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work
when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm
was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!"
He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned
him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal
desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the
eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply
back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as
to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own,
he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to
answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half
sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear.
Well not really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so
distracted these days! He takes a peek. “What
the….†The hallway is dark, too dark. It seems like someone has taken
out all the light bulbs. “Damn Mexicans!!!â€, he mutters under his
breath. "Trying to sell taco at this hour of night!"
Crippled
from last week's accident, he languishingly limps through the dark
corridor, holding tightly onto a 0.357 Magnum only to find a shadow
lurking at the other end of the wall. "Show yourself...or I'll shoot" , he yells at the general direction of the shadow while moving slowly towards it.
He utters silently "head I kill you, tail you die". But he couldn't find a coin to toss.
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It
was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are
legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in
tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She
started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in
transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for
something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately.
But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two
sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world.
Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She
was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in
love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had
always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she
was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and
finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he
goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he
musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen
carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It
was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work
when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm
was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!"
He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned
him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal
desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the
eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply
back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as
to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own,
he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to
answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half
sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear.
Well not really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so
distracted these days! He takes a peek. “What
the….†The hallway is dark, too dark. It seems like someone has taken
out all the light bulbs. “Damn Mexicans!!!â€, he mutters under his
breath. "Trying to sell taco at this hour of night!"
Crippled
from last week's accident, he languishingly limps through the dark
corridor, holding tightly onto a 0.357 Magnum only to find a shadow
lurking at the other end of the wall. "Show yourself...or I'll shoot" ,
he yells at the general direction of the shadow while moving slowly
towards it.
He utters silently "head I kill you, tail you die". But he couldn't find a coin to toss.It was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately. But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world. Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!" He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own, he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear. Well not really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so distracted these days! He takes a peek. “What the….†The hallway is dark, too dark. It seems like someone has taken out all the light bulbs. “Damn Mexicans!!!â€, he mutters under his breath. "Trying to sell taco at this hour of night!"
Crippled from last week's accident, he languishingly limps through the dark corridor, holding tightly onto a 0.357 Magnum only to find a shadow lurking at the other end of the wall. "Show yourself...or I'll shoot" , he yells at the general direction of the shadow while moving slowly towards it. He utters silently "head I kill you, tail you die". But he couldn't find a coin to toss. Just then,“Harry…sss†a feminine voice breathes past him along with a
cold gust of wind, “who’s this!.. how do you know my name?†he blurts in one
breath and reaches for the torch in his pocket and tries to light it on but it
tumbles down his hand.
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Hey fella's I always tried to follow this story but always get confused on the middle because the story doesn't make sense. What's up with aviator anyway? He repeats the same paragraph twice and thinks he is a writer. Dude come up with another idea and the author, don't try to mix up scenarios so as to make a good story. Make it simple and sensible. You don't have to mix stories to make a good novel. Btw, I am not trying to be a jackass but I was trying to lengthen the story by putting a sentence but the whole damn story doesn't make sense. Again, too many scenarios and weird vocabulary doesn't make a good story.
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It
was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are
legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in
tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She
started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in
transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for
something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately.
But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two
sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world.
Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She
was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in
love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had
always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she
was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and
finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he
goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he
musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen
carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It
was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work
when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm
was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!"
He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned
him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal
desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a
pact with the devil himself to release you from the eternity of
hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply back he had
heard the click from the other end. His final decision as to whether or
not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own, he thought,
while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to answer to
door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half sense does
not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear. Well not
really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so distracted
these days! He takes a peek. “What the….†The hallway is dark, too
dark. It seems like someone has taken out all the light bulbs. “Damn
Mexicans!!!â€, he mutters under his breath. "Trying to sell taco at this
hour of night!"
Crippled from last week's accident, he
languishingly limps through the dark corridor, holding tightly onto a
0.357 Magnum only to find a shadow lurking at the other end of the
wall. "Show yourself...or I'll shoot" , he yells at the general
direction of the shadow while moving slowly towards it. He utters
silently "head I kill you, tail you die". But he couldn't find a coin
to toss. Just then,“Harry…sss†a feminine voice breathes past him along with a
cold gust of wind, “who’s this!.. how do you know my name?†he blurts in one
breath and reaches for the torch in his pocket and tries to light it on but it
tumbles down his hand. He tries to search for the torch in the darkness but instead his hand feels something cold on the floor.
P.S- Sirus, We r not trying to make a epic over here mate!! We r just trying to pass away some boredom of all monotone we have in our works!! It is not the story that makes sense, but the random lines which makes twist on the story that keeps the boredom in dungeon. Hope u enjoy it as it is!
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It
was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are
legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in
tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She
started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in
transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for
something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately.
But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two
sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world.
Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She
was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in
love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had
always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she
was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and
finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he
goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he
musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen
carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It
was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work
when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm
was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!"
He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned
him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal
desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a
pact with the devil himself to release you from the eternity of
hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply back he had
heard the click from the other end. His final decision as to whether or
not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own, he thought,
while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to answer to
door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half sense does
not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear. Well not
really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so distracted
these days! He takes a peek. “What the….†The hallway is dark, too
dark. It seems like someone has taken out all the light bulbs. “Damn
Mexicans!!!â€, he mutters under his breath. "Trying to sell taco at this
hour of night!"
Crippled from last week's accident, he
languishingly limps through the dark corridor, holding tightly onto a
0.357 Magnum only to find a shadow lurking at the other end of the
wall. "Show yourself...or I'll shoot" , he yells at the general
direction of the shadow while moving slowly towards it. He utters
silently "head I kill you, tail you die". But he couldn't find a coin
to toss. Just then,“Harry…sss†a feminine voice breathes past him along with a
cold gust of wind, “who’s this!.. how do you know my name?†he blurts in one
breath and reaches for the torch in his pocket and tries to light it on but it
tumbles down his hand. He tries to search for the torch in the darkness but instead his hand feels something cold on the floor.He zooms in, only to realize that a 25 feet long coiled Anaconda was staring back at him.
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It was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately. But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world. Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!" He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own, he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear. Well not really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so distracted these days! He takes a peek. “What the….†The hallway is dark, too dark. It seems like someone has taken out all the light bulbs. “Damn Mexicans!!!â€, he mutters under his breath. "Trying to sell taco at this hour of night!"
Crippled from last week's accident, he languishingly limps through the dark corridor, holding tightly onto a 0.357 Magnum only to find a shadow lurking at the other end of the wall. "Show yourself...or I'll shoot" , he yells at the general direction of the shadow while moving slowly towards it. He utters silently "head I kill you, tail you die". But he couldn't find a coin to toss. Just then,“Harry…sss†a feminine voice breathes past him along with a cold gust of wind, “who’s this!.. how do you know my name?†he blurts in one breath and reaches for the torch in his pocket and tries to light it on but it tumbles down his hand. He tries to search for the torch in the darkness but instead his hand feels something cold on the floor. He zooms in, only to realize that a 25 feet long coiled Anaconda was staring back at him. "Rachel!!! Where have you been? I thought I lost you last week in the accident."
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It
was mundane work as usual. Last nights hangover! My head hurts, so are
legs, doctor can't say same ol' shit. It doesn't seem staring in
tranquility will work. I was killing work time;bored to death. She
started undressing; Someone help me. She needed hand lost in
transition,I was horny. I need to get work done.But she is waiting for
something else. Transfixed on her I decided to call her immediately.
But she didn't answer the phone. "What the hell!" I thought of her two
sons who were handicapped. They were all in illusion of the good world.
Then he called, but she was in the shower. She was thinking of him. She
was hoping he would leave her alone. But no, how could he, he was in
love, with a married woman with two kids and one on the way. She had
always been his love, ever since they first met when he was 5 and she
was 3. Drowned in her thoughts he decides to call her up again and
finally gets connected to the other end, "Hello Catherine!" he
goes."You again..." she answers. Avoiding the trivial chit-chat, he
musters enough courage to tell her the horrible news, "Listen
carefully, for I will never repeat this.Do you remember that old lady."
"It
was two years ago, on this very day, and i was driving home from work
when it all happened." It was raining hard outside and terrible storm
was rattling over the tin roof above him. "Old lady called me again!!"
He muttered catching his breath. "Beware, young man", she had warned
him with that ominous voice,"A day will come when all your mortal
desires shall cause you much great harm, and you shall have to make a pact with the devil himself to release you from the
eternity of hell--the pains and the suffering." Before he could reply
back he had heard the click from the other end. His final decision as
to whether or not to believe the ominous call would have to be his own,
he thought, while there was gentle knock on his door. He was afraid to
answer to door, the call has taken half his sense away. The other half
sense does not work anyway; he is blind in one eye and deaf in one ear.
Well not really but thats what his mother always says coz he is so
distracted these days! He takes a peek. “What
the….†The hallway is dark, too dark. It seems like someone has taken
out all the light bulbs. “Damn Mexicans!!!â€, he mutters under his
breath. "Trying to sell taco at this hour of night!"
Crippled
from last week's accident, he languishingly limps through the dark
corridor, holding tightly onto a 0.357 Magnum only to find a shadow
lurking at the other end of the wall. "Show yourself...or I'll shoot" ,
he yells at the general direction of the shadow while moving slowly towards it.
He utters silently "head I kill you, tail you die". But he couldn't
find a coin to toss. Just then,“Harry…sss†a feminine voice breathes
past him along with a cold gust of wind, “who’s this!.. how do you know
my name?†he blurts in one breath and reaches for the torch in his
pocket and tries to light it on but it tumbles down his hand. He tries
to search for the torch in the darkness but instead his hand feels
something cold on the floor. He zooms in, only to realize that a 25
feet long coiled Anaconda was staring back at him. "Rachel!!! Where have you been? I thought I lost you last week in the accident."
The loud voice mail from John, Rachel's ex-boyfriend, opened up his
eyes; he took a deep breath, relieved that the anaconda nightmare was
just a dream.
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